8726 9.11 and The World

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Terrorism has become a huge problem in the world today, you can see it everyday in the news and when it happens it seems to change our everyday life dramatically. On September 11, 2001 a terrorist organization know as Al-Qaeda put in motion the largest terrorist attack against the United States of America ever. Al-Qaeda which is lead by Osama Bin Laden, planned to hijack several civilian airplanes and crash them into multiple buildings on American soil. On 8:46 am on the morning of September 11, 2001 Flight 11, which was one of the hijacked planes slammed into the north World Trade Centre Tower and several minutes later flight 175 another civilian aircraft crashed into the south world trade centre tower. 2,752 people were killed on September 11, 2001 making it the largest terrorist attack against the United States of America ever. Many things were affected because of the 9/11 attacks and the changes were dramatic. As a result to the attacks of 9/11 the price of crude oil had risen, American security policies became very strict, and President George W. Bush declared war on terrorism.Everyyhings that happens in the world has a great impact on everyday life.


コメント / トラックバック 3 件

  1. myasudakg より:

    > a terrorist organization know as Al-Qaeda
    a terrorist organization knowN as Al-Qaeda

  2. myasudakg より:

    内容が成熟していて関心しました。でも英語も大事ですよ。
    > Al-Qaeda which is lead by Osama Bin Laden, planned
    lead v.s. led — past participle?

    >on American soil.
    on the American soil
    > slammed into the north World Trade Centre Tower
    slammed into the north Tower of the World Trade Center
    > flight 175 another civilian aircraft crashed into the south world trade centre tower.
    DITTO – WORD ORDER
     Flight 175, another civilian aircraft, crashed — use of commas ‘,’.
    > Many things were affected because of the 9/11 attacks
    because of v.s. ‘by’
    > As a result to the attacks of 9/11
    As a result of yyyy,
    or
    As a result of these 911 terrorist attacked
    or
    As a result of the 911 incident,
    Chao, MY

  3. myasudakg より:

    Please repost as a new thread, rather than modifying this thread, as prescribed in the following link and its comment:

    Click here to browse my thread: grading-911-blogs-101508

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